I really like your qualifier of how gathering the material has little impact as well because some 'green' energies are congruent with that. Another qualifier to consider may be that it uses natural resources without causing harm to them or perhaps it can supply energy to 'blank' amount of people. Really creative word choice though, I hope you have fun with it.
This is a very specific and descriptive topic. I think that you have strong qualifiers. You might want to clarify what extended period of time refers to--in terms of geologic time, decades, etc. You could also discuss how it is cost-effective. Great job!
This is a great topic to write about. But like Anna said, you should try to explain more about what types of clean energy that you are talking about. You qualifiers are very interesting.
This is a great topic. It does seem a little large but I would rather have more material then less. good qualifers and maybe you will find something new in the world of clean energy.
I like that you're taking such a fictional approach on this assignment. I think this topic could definitely use statistics to help its credibility. You could possibly try to find comparisons of environmental damage with clean energy and other not so clean energy. On the right track good job
Clean energy is a great topic for this essay. Also, your qualifiers support your definition and are argumentative. I would just recommend one more qualifier to make it perfect.
When I think of clean energy, I would think of a person have a positive attitude toward something or someone. I think you did well in defining your word, because when I read clean energy something else beside that pops. I feel though its very close that the actual definition and I don't think you have that good of a gap to prove that your definition is correct. I would specify more on your definition.
I really like your qualifier of how gathering the material has little impact as well because some 'green' energies are congruent with that. Another qualifier to consider may be that it uses natural resources without causing harm to them or perhaps it can supply energy to 'blank' amount of people. Really creative word choice though, I hope you have fun with it.
ReplyDeleteYour topic reminds me of hybrid energy and windmills and green houses.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very specific and descriptive topic. I think that you have strong qualifiers. You might want to clarify what extended period of time refers to--in terms of geologic time, decades, etc. You could also discuss how it is cost-effective. Great job!
ReplyDeleteGood job, I think you have great qualifiers.
ReplyDeleteExplain types of clean energy. Also what can the product produced do? Is it to light houses? Run cars? explain
ReplyDeleteI like how you chose to write your argument on clean energy, it's unique. Great start!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great topic to write about. But like Anna said, you should try to explain more about what types of clean energy that you are talking about. You qualifiers are very interesting.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Khoa. I don't think I can say anything more. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteGreat topic! Some people may argue that it is too expensive, but that is probably the only arguable thing that I can find!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great topic. It does seem a little large but I would rather have more material then less. good qualifers and maybe you will find something new in the world of clean energy.
ReplyDeleteI don't think your simple definition is very arguable! Maybe change it to "clean energy is a necessary change to end harm to our environment?"
ReplyDeleteI agree with Michael that you might have a lot of people will agree with your definition try to make it more arguable but this is a great topic.
ReplyDeleteI like that you're taking such a fictional approach on this assignment. I think this topic could definitely use statistics to help its credibility. You could possibly try to find comparisons of environmental damage with clean energy and other not so clean energy. On the right track good job
ReplyDeleteClean energy is a great topic for this essay. Also, your qualifiers support your definition and are argumentative. I would just recommend one more qualifier to make it perfect.
ReplyDeleteWhen I think of clean energy, I would think of a person have a positive attitude toward something or someone. I think you did well in defining your word, because when I read clean energy something else beside that pops. I feel though its very close that the actual definition and I don't think you have that good of a gap to prove that your definition is correct. I would specify more on your definition.
ReplyDeleteIn your definition, you use the word little, how much is a little?
ReplyDeletegreat definition there are many types of clean energy you can argue the definition and your qualifiers are well backed up as well
ReplyDeleteInteresting topic. I think it would benefit your paper to get more qualifiers.
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